I liked it👀👍
It had good animation, and I like monkeys.

It can come across as a bit random, but that is good for those who like to speculate if there is meaning to it all even if there may not be one at all.
For instance, one can think of the mango 🥭 as a goal we set, seeming so close to our resch yet when we reach for it, it becomes apparent how big the gap is between us and it is.

Thanks for posting👀👍.
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I really liked this drawing, so I decided to go read your story and leave a review of what I thought.

I didn’t really like the first chapter that much “Story”.
Those long sections of black were really annoying, not sure why, but it just was kinda disorienting.

I also just tend to prefer dialogue more than action or exposition.

I stuck around because I like anything horror related and there was only one more chapter to read.

I really liked the chapter called “You Ready?”.

I really liked that girl who was driving the car. She was funny👀👍.
I hated the redhead girl, she was so annoying to me🤣.

I’ll be waiting for the next chapter, I really like how you write dialogue, it feels natural and it’s entertaining.

Also, you might want to add a link to your story when you post Art of it, add a direct link to your webtoon page on your newgrounds account. People tend to be pretty lazy and don’t like to click on multiple links. Or not even notice a link.

Anyways thanks for posting your story👀👍.

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This is a very nice drawing 👀👍. I really like how you drew her, the background, pose, and composition.

Very Nice👀👍